A definite improvement. The forms are visually identifiable and easy to separate. The edges are nice and sharp and everything looks solid. good job. The only thing I would recommend is to apply stronger directional light. Right now it seems like everything is just based on ambient light so there is no distinct light source. Overall this detracts from the unison of the various elements. The cloth, for example, doesn't seem to be "part of" the picture.
Thank you so much. I'll keep improving. :3
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