Nice comic style work here it should have some more "FRAMES" though as this was pretty good and you make it come alive, but adding more comic like frams allows us to see more of whats going on, and sofar you seem to have a good story going on here so nice work and I look forward to seeing more of what you have in store for us.
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More comic frames.
Looks brutal. The red colorsheme and sketchy style of coloring really brings out the despair too. Looks like I stumbled upon a comic that must be read...
Can you send more in one page?
it would help get a good visual on the overall art style of the comic
Once all the pages will be posted i might do something like that. Thanks for the tip
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