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a single banana falling into the neon light

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truly a beautiful creature, the banana

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Interesting style. Definitely trying something new. Very cool perspective and composition. I don't really like the green reality rift around Pedro, it's too much and comes off a bit cheap in my eyes. If the color matched the rest of the picture better, I'd like that. There's just no other thing in the piece that's that color, and it's not really his color either. One thing that bugs me a little bit is that the walls meet in a point, but the player's head is above that point. At first it was also bothering me that he's not completely flat and is instead lifting his upper body up, but I think I like it better. I like the detail on the windows, they're really cool. Really awesome lighting too, though I'm not really an expert on that. His left arm looks a bit broken and I think the color of the broken shards of window glass should have some green reflected on them too for diversity. Those slain dudes in the background are pretty cool too, cool-looking execution.
Keep it up, dude, this is way rad! One of the most interesting entries I've seen entries I've seen so far.

24HoursSleeping responds:

Thanks for the in depth review! I was a bit worried on the green on Pedro (I wanted to kind of stick with a limited color palette and thought I could use some more green from the buildings), but I agree I probably should have gone with something else (maybe just a lighter yellow?) or ditch the rift around Pedro entirely.

On the glass I think your right as well. They were originally all green, then I switched them to all yellow to associate them with Pedro and the bullets, but I think adding some small green reflections would have made them seem less flat without taking from that.

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Jun 28, 2019
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