Not so bad

Nice beginning. Continue this story so you can improove by time your graphical skillz :)

Nice work.

Nice work and storyline but the graphics looked rushed. Sometimes parts of tables would fly about. The next one should be good though.

Patience is needed.

If it wasn't ready, you shouldn't of put it out there. Any way, if the series has better graphics it might be good, might be.

wtf?

the fuck was that!?

what the hell

i agree with the other guy , nothing happened ,it was a total load of crap learn how to draw and animate buddy.