Score: 1
"Not good"
date: October 8, 2008
It seems here that you went for a whole lot of different styles of entry, mish mashed together into one horrible mess, when it's clear you're not yet capable of working well in just the one style. It was a movie, then it was a game, which became and rpg, which became a choose your own adventure, which became a side scroller, which then ended in an abrupt and silly fashion.
You tried to cram in too many different styles of game here, with random chracters and backgrounds just thrown around, and it just didn't work. Half the backgrounds looked horrendous, and having top-down backgrounds for 2-d characters meant they had to look like spazz's when moving around on them.
The evil vegetable fight at the end was not only stupid, but it seemed like my bullets didn't affect its health at all, it just lost health randomly and arbitrarily. Then you just finish the stroy (if that's what it can even be called) by saying that Dr Light was back in the lab all along. Bah.
You need to try and focus your ideas on creating ONE solid story and entry instead of just cramming in every little idea you have.
