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Ok, my first ever ever flash, that has been finished my other one is the movie that this trailer is for. Well it's small and not very long it's just here to show you what is to come. Thanks and enjoy. Craig
evry thing uber cactrot said and
the size is to small and the evanscene sucks.
There were so many issues wrong here...
The sprite rips were very unclean, the soundtrack didn't fit and looped uncontrolled, the text scrolled too fast, and the animation was random. You DO have the start of a possible sprite confrontation here, but MUCH needs to be done.
I guess it was alright for your first flash, but I feel bad giving you this bad score! I'll help you with flash ok, I'm an expert at it! Contact Me
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Just do a little more work next time.
Its isnt that bad but next time make it bigger
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