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01/02/2001 | 11:42PM EST
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3.37 / 5.00
Score Rank: #34,161 Popularity Rank: #25,244
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by GK_studios (GK-studios): — Choose below… — 6 hour deadline animation Aleana 3 Show Your Skills Aleana EP2 Your oppenent Croco's Music swf delete contest
This is my first attempt to make a flash serie cartoon I worked a 2 days on the first serie ,So enjoy. I promise Part 2 will be better .I have flash for 4 days now.
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Average Score: 6.9 / 10
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I was able to piece together what you were trying to say here, im guessing that she was dreaming about fighting and then she woke up to realise that she was late for a real life fight so she quickly got changed and ran to the door, not a bad way to start a series i suppose. I thought that the sound in the background was rather unnecessary as it didnt fit the feel at all, i thought that the sound effects were good though except the footsteps as she went down the stairs. The best part of your flash short would have to be the way you drew the naked woman, it is so hard to draw one and even though you made it alittle large in some proportions you were able to create a pretty good character design. Overall not a bad start to a series.
~HJ~ (Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
"Not bad..."
graphics could be better. Animation was pretty good. I didn't like the sound much but it fit well. I haven't seen the rest of the eps yet but I'm guessing there better. So good work...
"boring, couldn't watch all the way through."
it was a boring start which is all i saw before i exited it, what a bad idea, a movie about a fight, wow who thought of that supid idea.
"good"
good but ok good
"hmm"
It was good, although you overdid the transitional effects like blurring. The beat track was appropriately matched.
One thing I'd like to point out is in the beginning with that translucent sheet, the girl's breasts look like they're melded together... rather odd. And I'm not entirely sure what you're going for with the lips. They seem to be always pink/white which would imply gloss or something, (she slept nude with gloss on? hrm.).
All in all, still a good effort.