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This is my first flash movie so please be honest and gentle with the reviews. I would like contructive feed back so my next posts will be better.
The characters are Anthony and George from my comic strip "Poppa's Tale", Anthony is the kid.
The joke is from a comedian I saw, but I can't remember who. I will give him credit as soon as I find out his name.
Well i thought this was really good but there was one thing that annoyed me a bit and that was the sound effect that you used for the chewing of the cookie it didnt sound believable. That being said though the rest of this short was very good, the voice acting was good, i loved the chipmunk effect you used for the kid, the character designs were good and the animation of the kid walking to the table where his dad was seemed really smooth. Overall a funny little flash.
bad joke, but funny still.
that was a good flash.
nice animation, drawing. But I don't like the joke. I do get it though. lol.
Really good for your first flash. Some people just don't know what they are doing and just post anything. I thought the sound was decent, your graphics very good for your first. Your next one could be a bit funnier. But I think you were just testing what you could do. Keep it up.
For your first flash this is not that bad. Art work was good and I think you have a good understanding of animation. As others have said before the plot was not very good but then this is your first. I give you alot of credit for your work. Keep at it.
The graphics were good but ur sense of humor is stupid. its not that funny, its something a little kid would say...nuff sed.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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