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hey danny ziet maar eens waaromdat zoiets geblamd word
Perhaps you could try another style? I dunno, try to do a more basic kind of cartoon the way you did the other one. I think you could turn out with something better if you're motivated ;)
just like the other work you did!
I hate people that just say something is crap and don't give you a reason so here is my reason.
1. Not funny
2. No point
3. Bad graphics
4. Waste of time
Despite all thoses things you honestly have potential! Just gotta work harder on your graphics and plot or point of the movie!!!
What good in copying a revieW?
This should have been blammed!!!
Despite my "light aura"
I'd still say this is bad. But you can animate, why cant you try harder I mean, draw it better, go get sounds from flashkit.com and make it funny. You could easily add humor to this movie.
Sooooo, I'm gonna give you a one and hope you'll try a bit more, okay?
Best of luck
U need to have better animation, some sound, and a lot more originality. Start from scratch with a good story and make a better flash animation.
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