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Not bad for a first try...
The graphics could use a few more details, but atleast it doesnt looks like a 3 year old has been playing with paint like other movies.
Microsoft Sam isnt a really lively voice, so recording your own voice or asking a friend would have been better.
But because i am in a good mood, you get a 7 overall from me :)
erm.....................since it's your first try ill give u a 5 =D im feeling nice try n make some more and improve on flash
Nice try. I think that as you go on making flash you'll get better.:)
Work on it.
You need to work on the animation and sound. Microsoft Sam isn't the best voice you want to give the main character. It sounds like he's on a speech box. The detail could've used some work, such as blood dripping off the table, and other subtle details. Also, the sound kinda made me cringe. Make it sound smooth; the guy's footsteps have this crack at the beginning that make the movie sound crappy. Also, make the files all the same sound level. The music is louder than the rest of the sounds (hint: you're not making a music video, therefore, music should be second that of other effects).
If you're going to finish, I suggest you make these changes.
Still needs a lot of work
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