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This is my first flash (any information on what I should improve would be helpful)
Also the loading page is NOT the flash Fun Wang (but is funny nonetheless)
The person who made this must have the largest penis anyone has ever seen...thats all Ive got to say.
I laugh everytime i see that fight!
This is what? The third time its been on NG? No matter, i still voted 5, cuz that fight cracks me up.
I've never laughed that much when seeing a flash before...
...for your first flash, it is good.
You need to improve the sound/voices... This would be the most important item I saw as flawed.
The graphics and animation will come with time and training...
You got the humor, the ideas (i.e. SPC) and just need to work on the sounds...
On other scores, they are not bad:
0 for Interactivity is just because there'e no interaction.
4 on violence is just because there are so much more violence out there that yours fade into less violent type :)
Hope this is helpfull.
Keep them coming.The only way to get better is by making more :)
what the hell is with the fat lesbo chicks...I DONT WANNA SEE THAT WHILE WAITING FOR A MOVIE TO LOAD!!
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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