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Syren Silverman (Tromavilles Jewish Warrior Princess) and Delicious (Tromavilles Bkini Clad Hotty) try to save a post apocalyptic Tromaville
Where are you going with this?
This is much better with the voice acting and sound effects. They all add to the themes expressed in this movie.
The reason why I ask where you are going with this is because you haven't hinted enough to the overall plot. And by not doing this, you confuse your audience by leaving them in the dark. It's obvious that the villian is the main character of this whole movie series. But if this is so, then the audience needs to be informed of what his main objective is along with his main obsticle. Since his main obsticle to keep close tabs on Delicious, then why doesn't he let the audience know what his plan is. So you can put the majority of the focus on the Villian making his plan happen.
Overall, this is a decent series, but I feel it needs more clarity in order to be stronger.
it was okay
i didn't really understand it, but... um... oh well
I feel everything went up a notch from the last episode, graphics, sound, and general premis. Good job.
cool you added some voices, could be better but still i like them...
the drawings and animation was intense!... that girl was mad hot! OMG OMG.. you rule!
A short film about a park bench
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