Looks Good but no plot
Your Work looks great, but spend more time for the plot.
its the plot which makes knox´s clay-animation so unique.
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yeha! its my second pongo today!!!
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clay movie
need more practise
that was short very jumpy and as the other guy sed the fight went out of the screen. you need more practise if you want to be as good as someone like knox. but i liked it. keep making more and improving your work
PriKedELiK responds:
ehy dude, Knox make a total different kind of animation... his main work is on spech and jokes, and its a great work, but except some ones, knox animations, in respect of clay modeling and image quality is really poor... and alwais keep in mind if u dont use at least 2 times the same shot, u really dont need to use flash... the knox work shold stay on a .avi portal. .swf is totally useless!
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If it was longer and he the fight didnt go off screen it would be better. BUt i still enjoyed it
Wish something funny would happen
As well as telling us what the heck a PONGO is!
I liked it! Good job man
I dont see much clay animation so when i do its either really crappy or well done. Yours is well done. The music in the beginning was chosen well, and the sound effects made me laugh.
You wouldnt happen to have an extra cigarette, would you? I ran out....