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This is my first completed flash movie. Please review it and tell me what you think.
I give it a 5.
I really liked it. It's true that it was too dark, and the plot was kind of muddled, but the atmosphere and style were spot on. I look forward to more work of this calibur.
"Libera Me" is a great song.
Kudos just for using that song. Your animation was really good. Reminds me of those 60's horror movies with good music and where everyone looked like gigantic dolls, heh.
This would make a wicked movie. Try and make a longer version or the story after this one.
I thought it was good, but I thought the ending was too soon. I like the graphics and you seem to be a good at flash. I liked it and I hope you come out with some more stuff.
Good for it's time
Production wise, it's nice, music being very appropriate and a lot of drama is instilled. However, I'm chiming in on the 'too dark' comment too. There were long stretches of just darkness and nothing else. While that can be used for dramatic purposes, it was heavy handed and illfitting on this one. The action sequences looked kind of rough. I imagine vampires being more graceful and quick, so I'd ask the animation/art reflect it. Don't get me wrong, this is pretty good, well above anything I'd call crap, but it needs more work to become 'excellent'.
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