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This is my first completed flash movie. Please review it and tell me what you think.
honestly just ok
It's too long to start, essentially non-animated, and very very dark. Most of the "animation" consists of yellowish heads bobbing up and down on a black background. Maybe dark colors are called for in this genre, but in this case it smells like an excuse to not have to draw as much. The rockin music and the premise of vampires aren't enough to get my blood pumping, without solid craftmanship to back it up. I think that the score is rather bloated, and this really deserves a 2.6 or so.
Lighten the background, draw more bodies, add more frames of real animation instead of moving around a head, and either reduce the opening credits time or give some way to skip by it.
So did Chase kill Lucifer's dad...? Whats going to happen? I guess that'll show in the next episode, hmmn? It's a bit dark in some areas, and I didn't see very much... The green-eyes/blonde hair one is Chase, isn't it?
I'm gad you lied it. Sorry I tried to make the story lineas clear as I could, but it was still alittle confusing. You see Lucifer and Chase Willow are brothers ans yea Chase killed their father. Yea Chase has green eyes and blonde hair.
But the hand in the ned was wrong and some other stuff was incorrect.... But good start...much better than me...
Good start....Not bad at all
Could use a little more developed storyline, you show promise that you could make a larger animation that was well worth downloading.
Prove me right =)
A short film about a park bench
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