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This is my first completed flash movie. Please review it and tell me what you think.
I want more!
That was a pretty good flash movie, but I had to dicount you points for stealing music from IWTV...I think you need to carry this story out...Flesh out your characters more, and try to get/use original music (local bands are a great source, many will let you sample their tunes in exchange for mention in the credits). Keep up the good work, and you might have a good flash series on your hands. Bravo!
the ORIGINAL Flash illiterate critic
Some of the scenes in the movie didn't look right like how the car moved from the cemetary to the mansion. You could've made it run smother so you can see it actually looks like it's moving, not like someone puppeting it to move. Certain parts got me confused like who's the guy with the brown hair? Also certain scenes should've been cut from the final product when the dude throws the stake at the old guy and then proceeds to put it in deeper by jump kicking it. Anyway keep working hard, I know flash is hard to do and does have limitations to it. But I feel that you will come out with great movies in the future.
Loved the music,I bet it took you a while on this one.I love anything that has to do with Vampires,so I hope this is not your last one on Vampires.Very nice keep up the good work..
I liked your style of animation, and I know you will be a fine future artist. What was really lacking in this flash was sound. I liked your music choices at some parts, but at others it just didn't match what was going on. Also, some sounds, like the sword sounds, were good, but others like the kicking part, just didn't sound paintful at all. I know that sounds....weird....but it's the truth. Sometimes the plot got a little zig-zaggy as well. Take note of this, and keep up the good work!
Drak but not that dark
Although the plot may have been sound, the darkness of the clothes and the atmosphere meant I lost a lot of what was going on in the screen.
However, you had good techniques and I am sure I will be seeing your work here in the future.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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