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This is my first completed flash movie. Please review it and tell me what you think.
not bad for a first animation. it's been a whie since i've used flash. the text in the start that explains the story goes by a little too fast though, i didn't have time to finish reading it before it poofed. the picture seems a tad bit too dark so it's hard to see a lot of what's going on. i know it's night time so i understand that, but a little more light would make it more cohesive as to what's happening. the characters could use a little more 3D aspect as well as they tend to look a little flat and appear as more pictures on paper than live characters or undead characters for that matter. has some good ideas.
Loved the Interview with the Vampire music. I did not get the animation though.
Good for it's time
Production wise, it's nice, music being very appropriate and a lot of drama is instilled. However, I'm chiming in on the 'too dark' comment too. There were long stretches of just darkness and nothing else. While that can be used for dramatic purposes, it was heavy handed and illfitting on this one. The action sequences looked kind of rough. I imagine vampires being more graceful and quick, so I'd ask the animation/art reflect it. Don't get me wrong, this is pretty good, well above anything I'd call crap, but it needs more work to become 'excellent'.
love the music one of my favorite peaces and the movies really good to hope to see more of your work x
the graphics could've been better but other than that it was pretty good
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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