Score: 9
"Please reply if you read this(just an ok would do)"
date: February 15, 2008
Im not a 'fan' fan of Conan, but i have seen parts of the movie. But i'd like to give you a few pointers.
The silence in between distracted me a bit(like the time where she is walking), so try to keep it either completely silent, without a soundtrack and without special effects or a very soft soundtrack or ambient sound to keep viewers interested(Not that what you made was boring).
Also, i dont know if you meant it, but the robed character(im not a fan so i dont know who she is) but in the sequence where she was walking toward the altar, maybe showing the legs moving(Still getting the feeling of her body gliding even after doing so) would have looked better.
After all that, you must think that i hated your submission right? Well, i loved it and am anticipating your next part.