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This small Fruitworks preview is my first Newgrounds submission. While I am always open to suggestions, I will eventually submit the actual series to Newgrounds regardless of this preview's scores.
Nice, it seemed like more of a company logo at the beginning of a flash entry though, which isnt a bad thing you see ppl upload these sorts of things all the time to get them rated. I thought that the muppets song you chose to use in the background was well choosen for the flash but the apple seemed pretty dull by itself on the screen if i may i would suggest that you add a background of some description.
(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)
What do you have against apples?
Hmm.. You did well on your graphics. However, I tend to dislike previews. I believe that they should actually be submitted when the actual movies are done. But I'll check out your Fruitworks movies when they come out if I see them. When do you plan on submitting those or are you still going to? I've noticed no one has reviews for almost a year so yeah lol.
ive got to give it a 0 there just isnt enough there but it looks like its shaping up nicely
that was pretty good!
OK, ive got to give you some credit. I usually HATE movies that are shorter than 15 seconds...(this on lasted about 5!) but.. for some strange reason... i dont hate it... in fact... I LIKE IT!
P.S. im going to have that song in my head all day!
I thought it was pretty cool, its short and all that crap but its only a preview.
Thanks, I would've made it longer but it only started out as a movie to show my family n friends how much better I was getting (I was a beginner). Even for a preview it's short though.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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