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This is my first movie. I just wanted to see what I could do with Flash. Hopefully it will not be my last.
a short movie about bulimia
and because she is told the human body is ugly she trying to make herself skinny
it is a bit short, and the graphis could have been better, but I found it pretty funny, and I defintely think it's a great short. The whole message is so true, bulemia is a fucking disgusting concept, so it's kind of funny that some girls employ it as a means of "looking better".
I actually didn't think it was too bad. The animation was a little choppy and kinda primitive, but this flash wasn't too bad. The concept was god, since people actually have that problem, adn the irony behind the vomit there is quite humorous. The graphics weren't too bad, but they could have been better. The voice was decent enough as well. Not sure exactly what to improve on other than to just keep practicing.
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Well this did give me a few chuckles, the art well it was abit old style and could use some updating, the joke was sorta funny, abit sick but still funny...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well the artwork ofcourse, you did well on the character but maybe abit more detail would help...
A funn but sick joke for all to enjoy if they can haha...
A nice, funny idea done poorly
The start was nice with the girl looking in the mirror and seeing herself as fat when she isn't as it's showing how many women view themselves(fat when they're not), the end after she threw up was gross and was a bit over the top, you had a nice idea for a movie here you just didn't pull it off, you could've added more to it, somehting could've happened after, like she could've gone out on a date looking like she did at the end or something, which would've made it better and funnier. This movie as it was was crap, I'll admit there's worse movies out there but this is still poor.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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