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whew this is my first real flash movie i put up on newgrounds my other submissions were sent in by mistake this is my first movie so dont expect something real fancy
Don't expect anything fancy???
Ok, as your first submission, I guess its fair not to expect anything fancy, but you could at least have had the decency of posting something worthy of the time it takes to open and watch.
YOU HAVE FAILED SIR.
No, just no.
Bad... DAMNIT... BAD!!
The ONLY reason i didnt BLAM the hell out of this is because althought it sucked, you DID put SOME effort into it.
Just keep practicing... and for the love of god, dont do that again.
........wot.....the...hell.... .that was so very very gay, that you need shooting u sad TWAT.
The music is too distorted. Try kicking it down a few notches pal. The speech balloons come and go too fast for me to read them. The movie was done before I could get an idea of what it was about. Didn't bother watching it twice.
The sound.. it's like a busted speaker. And the graphics are kinda, blah. The lil' words go by so fast you can bairly read it, to small. =\
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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