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This is a little diddie I threw together, It almost reminds me of david linches stuff, make your own story!
-Could someone anyone reveiw plzplz?!
Also I didnt think that it was gonna get this good of rate I guess I finnly did one that at least went over my stander (for now) ;)
the story was hazey but good none the less
At first when I saw it was going to be a stick figure flash, I thought "God, better rev up that blam button", but this flash may not of had the best of graphics but it certainly made up with style and a wicked musical score which matched the creepy atmosphere terrifically.
Good job. And as someone said before, it would of been scarier with objects other than stick. But good anyway.
Nice movie you got here. The graphics were very unique with the buildings and everything. But I did take 1 point off because of, well, sticks aren't scary :P Well anyways the sound went well because of it being well creepy music
Less applause, more constructivism.
First off, the really positive points. You have a good grasp of directing - your use of text overlay and the "scratches" effect really set a spooky mood. It would definitely seem you have talent. Without the haunting soundtrack though, this would be little more than a slightly feeble attempt at stick horror - the graphics suck. With your grasp of directing, and decent graphics - you could go somewhere. Work on that.
Also, don't listen to that other guy ... don't have "some goddamn plot" - stick with your style, it's what makes this movie rock after all. Can't wait to see more along these lines...
you heard the motherfucker, take his money
definitely some untapped potential... maybe with some goddamn plot, you could make something that makes sense and not leaves you wondering whether to send you all my money like the other fucker or call the insane asylum on your ass... goddamnit, go make more flash movies!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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