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This is my First movie, if you have any tips, please tell!
i'm actually impressed =)
hey, that was actually pretty good for a first movie! my first movie was crap! this one was really plain and simple, but this being your first movie i'm actually pretty impressed. keep practicing and if you've got the patience, you'll end up with something really good! cheers! =)
First flash? Not bad...
Its good to experiment with stuff like this or you'll never learn how to animate properly. The characters are so simple that you could've motion tweened them and made it cooler...also make the blood animated, not just a spot appear on them, make it splurt blood before the spot. This is all I can offer you in the way of helping you, the rest will come easily after you get this.
Nice job anyways for your first.
Its Alright 4 Ya 1st
Ya Its Good Make Better Linings Of The Characters And At Least Find Sum Sprites! or try too....
not to shabby for a first flash, good job
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Hmmmm ok well ill go easy since its your first well its not to shaby for ypour first, it could use some backrounds, and more char desighn, and then add some story into it, interesting music, nice work for your first though...
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