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Add some backrounds
Simple and entertaining, but needs some improving i would start with more refined characters not so thick in lines, and add some backrunds, that would be a start, i did like this animation though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above some new characters and backrounds would be the place to start
Simple and entertaining
i agree with Ktulu007 not even worth a glance.
No wonder people hate sticks.It had no plot,bad music and bad fighting.The only thing that this accomplished is making me laugh.
Not even worth a glance
You obviously have no skill, I wouldn't recommend this to my nemesis.
weird, lame, crap, funny-ish....
Better than I could ever do, so....
i gave you a three because it was creative and it displayed good foreshadowing for the next one. good job/ keep working.
Man im not even tring i just put this on here cuz i never had my shit on
a site before so i put it up forget all
yall who dont like me but I bet you'll
be watchin my real shit yeah!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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