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This is my first excursion into flash for over a year. Please provide constructive criticism.
* NOTE: this anim. is undergoing rework in response to viewer imput.
I liked the idea you had, but I think you got impatient toward the end and tried to end it quickly. And what was with that zombie thing? I couldn't make out it's face or anything distinguishable. Good idea, but needs some work.
good, but kind of short
I wish it was longer. I liked it.
Not too shabby, enjoyed the graphics and background sounds the most
you did pretty good. You need just need to make it more of story. I liked it.
((( NICE WORK )))
I like the idea, but it needs more story, i do like the black, and whit though, maybe some more extra detail, and some more audio, but overall it looks good...
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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