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May be an unpleasant experience to some audience
I agree with huuch01 on some points.
I got where you were trying to take this flash but it lacked depth and it used some almost completely random scenes to give a false sense of substance. I don't think it was all bad but some flash projects just miss the audience cause of the lack of substance. Some of what this flash showed felt kind of meaningless.
First let me give it to you straight up.
-The animation was mediocre, although I think with a little more time spent you could have easily done something with a little more artistic talent than my 5 year old cousin.
-What kind of mood were you trying to set? Was I supposed to be scared? Tripped out? Sad? I felt like it was maybe hinting to one of those, but none of them were accomplished. The only feeling this film made me feel was confused about how I was SUPPOSED to feel.
-The sound effects were decent, but only because I assume you have a budget of $0.00
-Take it back to the drawing board. If you aren't going to give it anymore depth, at least give it some implied depth. The creator of Salad fingers, despite his poor animations, sound FX and crappy dialogue, manages to give his cartoon some sort of depth.
-what was with the murdered dude? It added absolutely nothing to the story.
Secondly... WTF dude? Get a different hobby!!!... I appologize for the digression...
ohhh, so nice
well, the crow really gave him a gift.
wow uh that was different?
...I'd wanna cat like that...
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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