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Detective Frofrog

rated 3.69 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Jan 16, 2003 | 9:17 AM EST
  • Daily Feature January 16, 2003

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NEW VERSION (19:th Oct 2003)
Check it out now!!!

Let's celibrate the release of the second episode by checking out the new UPDATED verion of THIS movie!


First off, I know the file size is a bit big - But THIS is WORTH it! And there's a really neat preloader in the meantime.

I have worked on this for more than half a year now. It has taken insane amounts of time and effort to get it done. I'm very happy with the result and hope that you like this cool alien cartoon!

This is the beginning of a series, but due to the work I put into the episodes, I don't think the next one will be out until the summer.

But I can't reply to all at once. I will do it when ever I find the time. I promise to have it done by the time the next episode is out :) I read them all at once though and I'm thrilled that so many people like the movie and I'll improve from the critisism.

Tell me if you collect all eggs!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Done Pretty Good!

I like the preloader, I liked the movie the way it was drawn, the fact that there were easter eggs to collect was cool.

Though I read you liked South Park, I couldnt get a feel for this movie, I thought it was a good movie, but I really well started to get bored with the movie.

It had some slight humor, but the comedic value wasnt too good, in my own opinion but maybe that isnt what you were going for. The plot needed to flow a bit better, and if it was supposed to be a comedy, it just was off timing a bit, I mean you know the saying Timing is Everything in a joke, and some of the ongoing gags were too long, like the what do I want to drink, and the smacking the other guy.

Why did the guy have an axe in his head? And why is Frofrog so angry? Is he supposed to be slightly psychotic? I didnt catch a feel off of him, if he is supposed to be random, you still need more of a plot to allow a character a central character to be random.

This is the longest review, I've ever written, and I think you did really well on your movie without a doubt, good job. Just trying to offer some constructive criticism.

McRhyme responds:

Thank you indeed for your constructive criticism. I need it and read it very carefully!
The bar scene is sort of slow, but there are some things going on beside the conversation. I wanted it to have a slow jazz feel. Like they we're hung over the hundred night around.

Frofrog being random. Interesting thought. He tends to get violent, which is funny because he seems to calm at first. Like a friendly fat guy!

The timing might be off at some points but I've seen the movie too many times now, that I can't really tell anymore.