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kid gets hit by car
a stick figure is skateboarding on the road in front of a car
gets hit and floats for a while
he can easily see the car
natural selection at work there
I think i remember this
I think i remember this from long ago, it was spretty neat, OKfirst of all this is notbad its really too short though, So maybe upgrade this with some longer scenes, maybe have him skate on differant parts of the sidewalk and such, The flash is just too short and just is over before it started now i did get some humor from it but maybe making it longer or with other short tunes would show abit more quality on your end, You may also want to do something with the "STICK" character as it was abit plain, After messing with this abit i found it to be a really decent and fun flash, allthough it did lack some stuff, it could still be better, So i have mentioned some ideas and even basic stuff that other flash like this one have so below in the improvments section may help good luck either way.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since you had just Stick characters, I suggest making more Character like characters with full color facial details, This will show lots of effort in your character design, it tends to take more effort but the results will pay off alot. Just having a more full character you can do more with and improves on the quality of your flash as a whole. have him skate on differant parts of the sidewalk and such, but also give differant scenes like a city backdrop and such, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, also add some play and replay buttons so that the user can navigate better, the stop action code will stop the loop, and is easy to emplement it can be done thru the script in the flash code bars. I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, just the one short single flash is ok but its over before it gets started and theres not much enjoyment out of that.
not the worth I've seen by any means but still, it is just a stick man getting hit by a car and net really too much of anything that could be described as amusing. The length of his flight after getting hit by a car was pretty funny though, so good work on that I guess.
You seem to have basic animation down, so I'll give you credit for that. That being said, you definitely could've done better than this. A stick skateboarding, hitting the car, and shooting into the air. It doesn't even stop when he lands, it just goes right to the main menu instead of staying on him, which is a huge flaw. The graphics were pretty poor except for the car, there were no buildings or anything, just the road. This flash really wasn't good at all.
All this is is some stick guy skating then a car hits him, if that's all you were going to do with the movie, the car should have hit him sooner into the movie than it actually did, also he was flying through the air for way too long. This was a truly dreadful flash movie.
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