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Submitted: 01/02/2003 | 02:14PM EST
File Info: Movie | 3.1 MB | Add Movie to Favorites
Current Score: 3.96 / 5.00
1,501 votes | 11,004 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by Oz Thomas (Virgilcomic): — Choose below… — Armor (a short story) Balance by Oz Thomas Chance Meetings Corpus Callosum (1) Cosmogenesis Cyberdreams David forgets his shoes Drakestail Fate. Firewing Home... How th'Battle will be won Kaleido scope Kung Fu Fighting Life in Motion Life of a Dog Living(animated poem) New Frontier -Chapter Six New Frontier Preview New Frontier-Chapter Five New Frontier-Chapter One New Frontier-Chapter Two New Frontier-ChapterEight New Frontier-ChapterFour New Frontier-ChapterSeven New Frontier-ChapterThree Owl (Book One) Owl (Book Three) Owl (Book Two) Pandora's Box Pilgrim Raven Steals the Light Round River Samantha Seeing in the Dark Setting Sun Shadow by Oz Thomas Skullface Sammy Soul Crusher Technotopia The Search The Afterlife The Creator The Grasshopper The Hero Twins The Invisibles The Mexica The Owl and The Pussycat The Rainbow Serpent The Seed Jar View all 60 of this author's submissions
In an alternate future we live in a military state. We are born, live and die in fortresses called "compounds".
All of your needs and desires are taken care of as long as you do what is asked of you.
It's foolish not to conform when so much is provided for you. It's impossible to escape. Those who don't conform are the defective.
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Average Score: 8.6 / 10
"interesting"
The only sugesstion I would have would be to slow down the rate the text changes but just by a bit, I usually read fairly quickly, but at times, I noticed myself looking at the animation a second or so too long and the last line or so of a text box had passed, aside from that interesting utopia story, unique in that the main character was in the end, content with his preformatted life, I did note however the change to color during the last bit representing suzy's potential freedom or what it would have been had she lived, and thought that that was a nice touch.
"Wow"
Your work is so unique and makes you think and I love it! I think I'd better check out everything else you've done..
Cool. Thx.
"good work!!"
this is a masterpiece,very original and well realised.the sound is awesome and the white and black graphics create a nice negative atmosphere.so,in conclusion what you are doing is great and i hope you will keep it up :) u have ur own style! :P
"WOW"
This flash reminded me of the book the giver, and who said drugs never did any good. Mien hat is off to you.
Thx.
"wow"
i was floored, i'm voting 5
