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In an alternate future we live in a military state. We are born, live and die in fortresses called "compounds".
All of your needs and desires are taken care of as long as you do what is asked of you.
It's foolish not to conform when so much is provided for you. It's impossible to escape. Those who don't conform are the defective.
This is a very weird cartoon. It's mostly just this text going on and on forever. It was too fast to really read it. Yes, I know I could have simply paused. That just isn't what I want to do in a Newgrounds submission. It was interesting how big this was.
I felt like you could have just released this in separate parts. I don't even know how this fits the author comments. It's certainly worth checking out. The animation was fairly good. Wow, was this weird.
The only sugesstion I would have would be to slow down the rate the text changes but just by a bit, I usually read fairly quickly, but at times, I noticed myself looking at the animation a second or so too long and the last line or so of a text box had passed, aside from that interesting utopia story, unique in that the main character was in the end, content with his preformatted life, I did note however the change to color during the last bit representing suzy's potential freedom or what it would have been had she lived, and thought that that was a nice touch.
Your work is so unique and makes you think and I love it! I think I'd better check out everything else you've done..
this is a masterpiece,very original and well realised.the sound is awesome and the white and black graphics create a nice negative atmosphere.so,in conclusion what you are doing is great and i hope you will keep it up :) u have ur own style! :P
This flash reminded me of the book the giver, and who said drugs never did any good. Mien hat is off to you.
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
GwainSaga - (Original Serie)
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