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Always wanted to make a hentai video, here's my first ever attempt!
Nejire Hado and Mirio Togata from My Hero Academia!! If you watch the Anime you won't know them, they'll appear soon!
Edit: Whoever got shit to say FITE ME
Seriously weird bone structure going on...but good job on the audio!
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total crap no offence but needs alot of work on art, voice attachment and body movement
Here to offer some support! I see the potential, and hope you'll continue to make animations! Making mistakes isn't a problem, but learn from them!
I will say the animation is fluid and your line work is really good. HOWEVER, the anatomy on this is extremely flawed. Like the pelvis is screwed up and she has like no rib cage. Her body is so deformed if you look closer at it. Here are some pelvis examples. https://www.google.com/search?biw=1600&bih=770&tbm=isch&sa=1&q=pelvis+anatomy+references&oq=pelvis+anatomy+references&gs_l=psy-ab.3...7446.11365.0.11522.214.171.124.0.0.0.139.1150.7j5.12.0....0...1.1.64.psy-ab..0.3.269...0j0i30k1j0i8i30k1j0i8i13i30k1.4erPyj82lr8#imgrc=4VIKipaO80aPEM:
and here's a lil tip on how it should kinda look
Please try to practice and learn how pelvises work. I believe you can improve
Would've been great if someone gave me this feedback while i was still in the sketching stage rather than after i finished and rendered everything :/
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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