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Animated Teaser 09: Stoop

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rated 3.60 / 5 stars
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Action
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gun
anime
manga
2d

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Jul 24, 2017 | 5:29 AM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place July 25, 2017

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New draft animated scene for my “Manga Book” anime teaser
You're welcome to visit my youtube channel for more insight and WIPs: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC8QnV6w7DkrEJqBd8cxEWzg
facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/ibrabdo2/

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CrabbWalkerCrabbWalker

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

You have some pretty smooth animation, and you are definitely not afraid to work different camera angles and work from different perspectives. The hair looks gorgeous. The hands in the beginning are so well animated, it almost looks rotoscoped!

I have but two points I'd like to hammer down, specifically with this scene. The shot from the girl holding the sniper to the guy running towards it; both characters are on the right side when the camera cuts; which can be jarring for some viewers...just apply the 180 rule whenever you can to develop a more stronger coordination between your two well animated characters. Your run cycle is pretty good, but don't be afraid to twist and move that torso a bit! I know that shot in particular is hard, and give you kudos for doing that :D


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ibrabdo responds:

thx for the feedback, and well said, u r totally right about the wrong camera shot :( i realized it after posting, since i was planning to have an insert shot between them, but i deleted without considering that point when posting, ur critic is always welcome :)


xaalsterxaalster

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice it looks crazy smooth! some of your poses could use a bit more of a dramatic flare though to nail home the action for instance the guy running looks super stiff I would recomend you let his arms come to full extention while hes running


ibrabdo responds:

thx :)


DeadlyMace2DeadlyMace2

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Looks great so far. I look forward to the finished stuff :D


ibrabdo responds:

thanks :)