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A puzzle game I made for a project. Any feedback on this is appreciated.
-Character Illustrations and the sprites for The Muse and Shizuka are my own.
-Both background music provided are mine as well. (Composed and played by my sister and I.)
-Some tilesets edited by me.
I would provide a download link, but I think this should suffice unless the community wants it.
for a demo it's not that bad- what is the engine you used though and how ? i know that's alot to ask but i would love to code and make a game like this for ppl to enjoy. im assuming rpg maker but i wonder how though ;w;
the only issues to complain on is the grammar, just minor statements in the game ive knoticed when you first finish the puzzle in the alt world bedroom. beyond that I love the art style, line-less sorta painted avatars look nice and the game handles kinda perfectly. I hope to see the full game soon enough.
Absolutely loved it, can't wait for the full version
Keep it up! This is a great start, and an awesome first puzzle. I hope in the full version there will be other quests and different puzzles to solve; too much of the same thing becomes repetitive, and would take away from what is so far a very polished and interesting game. This is perfect as a first chapter though.
I really like the starting premise, you've managed to give the protagonist a unique perspective that subtly connects the player to the character; the protagonist being mute (and unable to hear themselves) mimics the players connection to the game (unable to speak directly to characters, and reading the protagonist's thoughts on screen).
I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. In this game you've managed to take the RPG maker format and create something unique, which I think takes some ingenuity. I like RPG maker, but sometimes games that use it can feel similar. You've completely avoided that pitfall. Nice job.
The story is interesting and the dialogue is well written. A very promising demo.
SO MUCH potential. I agree with a lot of the criticisms of my peers, but I love the aesthetic and the execution of this first puzzle. I hope further iterations explore more diverse types of puzzles and help flesh out the differences between our world and theirs. I can't wait to see how this progresses. Good luck!
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