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well i don't have much to say, just another peek of what will come in the future, but this time with sounds xD.
and sorry folks no climax again, climax i'm guarding for the finished version xD.
The animation is good but I am not feeling the moaning sound. I honestly would have preferred if you just did the moaning sound yourself.
thx, but if i do the moaning myself, will be a male with a strong voice lol xD.
but i agree the moaning sound is a bit shit.
Smooth and beautiful! Bit short a loop, but not bad at all.
hehe ty man, i did that short just to test some sounds in the scene, But it didn't go well xD.
Pretty good! A few things: Her facial features outline looks a bit too thick - her nose and brow area look strange. This can be fixed with either thinner lines or a lighter line color. The style of One Piece has the outline around the bottom of the nose disappear with just the nostrils visible when her character is seen from that angle. The hair and butt animation look great (though there is a disconnected line just behind the penis), but the breasts look a little too static. I would also love to see it with a background, or even just toning down the gradient so it's less harsh. The sounds are pretty generic sounding and might actually hurt it more than help it - the quality of the audio is also pretty low.
I give this critique with love, because I know you will improve.
There is a lot of potential, so keep it up! I look forward to more!
The thing with her face is very strange, the lines is already thinner, but when you zoom out the lines go thicker dunno why, i think is perspective, but i can try some lighter colors to see how it goes.
The breasts is hard to animate in that scene, because the upper body is not moving that much and the arms are pressing them, but i can put some moves on them before the final version.
And for backgrounds i'm focusing in animations now, because i'm still bad at them (horrible tbh), them when i get better at animations i can try do some backgrounds, and for sounds are hard to find good ones, the only good that i can get is buying, but i'm poor and don't have money for that xD, so i'll have to use bad ones till i get money to buy good ones (this will delay a lot lol)
and i love your works dude, it's a honor you giving me some tips, i always appreciate good critiques, they help me a lot xD. (sorry for the english, if i said something wrong lul)
man the jiggly's make me sooo happy also sound (*-*)b
hehe ty man xD
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