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Everything about this is just mediocre and watching the rest of your stuff makes it kinda apparent that you're struggling to come up with original ideas. Nearly everything you make is based off something popular like Vinesauce or Undertale or YOUTUBE MEMEZ like Big Smoke and We are Number One. You're good at animating, don't get me wrong, but you seem more concerned about having your cartoon associated with something trendy to soften the blow of your subpar writing.
Thank you for your feedback. I actually greatly appreciate someone giving me an honest review. In all honesty this kinda stuff I basically just do for fun. I have no intention of getting any mileage out of it. Just something to do as a hobby sort of. I am actually putting a lot of time into a project that I am hoping to make it have good writing and characters while still having good animation. And yes I am aware my writing isn't the best but I am striving to improve on it. Probably the last "trendy" thing I will basically put out is a Garfielf but it's animated and I am going to try to put out more original content. Thanks for your feedback. I will work on those things that you mentioned and try to improve on those aspects.
9/11 cus lenny.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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