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Y'know, one that won't get me a turd of the week award, (Thanks NewGrounds, really needed it)
Its was a pretty funny animation but try to make your animation not so stiff and some bounces and extra movement. Also try to stick with the plot because i have no idea what luigi had to do with anything.... If you made it to where mario bumps into luigi and they both loose a life then that would be a part of the plot.. But just having a scene of luigi walking had nothing to do with it :/... Also your camera work is a bit off.... but other than that Nice Attempt! :D
Thanks. Yeah, I'm still improving so yeah, I'm pretty new to this.
I kinda feel like Luigi didn't really contribute to the flow of the movie. That and the humor, beyond Mario getting chased by a Bullet Bill could of been a bit more eventful.
On a more technical note, work on your smoothness in movement.
Good attempt! Please keep trying.
Yeah, I kinda felt Luigi didn't add anything as well.
Have to say, this is quite good enough i guess but keep practicing, and i think you can do good, and also you get talents, so have fun!
Thanks! I'll try to work on that.
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