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Scuinox is a mysterious human who ventures to different planets.
It's probably kind of bad that I started with this one, but I'll definitely check out the others because I do think what you've got going here is very cool. It's nicely done over all, but I do have some notes for improvement. The biggest thing for me is while the song is cool and definitely fits the setting, I think it's production needs some serious work. I don't know if you are the one who made the song, but what stands out about it to me is the mixing and mastering of the track didn't receive enough attention. I don't know if you know what sidechaining is, or how to do it, but I think a big problem here lies within the sidechaining of the kick drum. It's either not sidechained to the bass, or it's sidechained too much and overpowers everything else. While it may have been a stylistic choice, and it does create a cool effect, it's too powerful, and that essentially muffles all of the other sounds in the track, which really diminishes it as a whole.
As far as the animation itself goes, one thing that I really love are the backgrounds, I think they are done very well, so good job on that. One thing I think could improve is the fluidity. Some parts, such as the gun shooting for example, are hard to follow because the animation is a bit clunky and jumpy. This could be fixed by using more keyframes at a higher FPS, or with more precise tweening.
I think your story is good, if not a bit generic. That's said without having scene the other parts though, so I might rescind that statement.
Over all, I like it quite a lot. I think you did very well. Keep up the good work, and I'd love to see more. I followed so I'll be expecting updates :) Good luck on future projects.
I'm glad you like them. Thank you. I make the music for all of my videos as well as the animation and voices. I am aware of the mastering problem. Thing is that I have over 100 beats which a lot of them weren't mastered right because I lacked the expertise at the time they were made. Some of my tracks I did my best to compress them and put on finishing touches. So I could go back and attempt to fix the tracks but I guess I still have more to learn about mastering.
I dont understand, why do so many people like these animations? they're poorly drawn and animated.
They don't deserve to be saved.
True but I've seen a lot worse that passed on here.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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