Play Hentai Heroes!

Casual adventure on a wild beach

Score:
rated 2.18 / 5 stars
Views:
6,952 Views
Share Links:
Genre:
Adventure - Other
Tags:
story
novel
giantess
meetandfuck

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jun 18, 2017 | 2:55 PM EDT

If you liked this, check these out!


Author Comments

"Casual adventure on a wild beach" is a quick visual erotic micro novel with the branching story. It's about a young man Sam who met a giantess. This is my first novel, and I made it as an experiment, so I did not pay much attention to graphics and story. If feedback about this novel will be more or less positive, then I will do more. In future novels, I'll try to make the graphics more qualitative, and the story more interesting.

P.S. Sorry for my bad english.
P.P.S. In the English version of the story, mistakes are also possible, so help with the translation are very welcome.

Reviews


Bob1923Bob1923

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Didn't load
TypeError: this._bitmap is null


People find this review helpful!

demoneyedwarriordemoneyedwarrior

Rated 4 / 5 stars

This is an interesting visual novel that really leaves you
wanting more. It also could use a bit better artwork but
I enjoyed it. Plus the lady is a whole lot of woman.



EmnowEmnow

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

short but cool!


People find this review helpful!

KINGROCKET01KINGROCKET01

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

"This is my first novel, and I made it as an experiment, so I did not pay much attention to graphics and story. If feedback about this novel will be more or less positive, then I will do more."

See, there's your first problem right there. A "visual novel" whole point is telling a good story with interesting graphic involved (like, that's what "visual" and "novel" are there for). Yet you decided to not pay attention to it AND expected to recieve positive reviews? Don't contradict yourself, m8.

Next, is of course the grammar problem. All visual novel have them, so it not like i can really blame you. Refine your writing, read over the script, have a proof reader, that kind of standard procedure.

Finally, i don't think switching between anime style and realism work very well in this type of thing, especially when both style are used in the same shot.


People find this review helpful!

JunkWarrior847JunkWarrior847

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I don't really see any much excitements in it...I don't know? I like to see more something fun instead say, "they keep meet, again, again, ag-blah blah." I hate to see this off-screen. In result, it was really disappoint ever I seen. Good job on story and character designs. It is what save you from give you a zero rating.