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SCARIEST EXPERIENCE OF MY LIFE! (3/3)

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rated 2.97 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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story
experience
camp
storytime

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Uploaded
May 31, 2017 | 6:29 PM EDT

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SCARIEST EXPERIENCE OF MY LIFE (1/3):https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-warxR3hTlM
SCARIEST EXPERIENCE OF MY LIFE (2/3): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K01MDS4JA48
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Songs I used:
Ipanema Daydream by Bird Creek
Green Hill Zone from Sonic 1
Unanswered Questions by Kevin MacLeod
The Land of the Wizard by Machinimasound
Vast Lands by Shockwave-Sound
Look at me by XXXtentacion
Gargantuan Music - Ocean Sky by Matt Bowdler
Postman Theme from Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess by Nintendo
Hidden Agenda by Kevin MacLeod

Reviews


StephenHutchinsStephenHutchins

Rated 3 / 5 stars

three stars because you're good at storytelling and it kept my attention but otherwise it would've gotten 1.5/5

It's okay to not have super fancy art or animation but at least put some effort into the quality of the drawings. Little things like cleaning up the lines and keeping them the same weight, choosing a stronger color pallet and adding even one or two more in betweens to the animations could really transform the overall package.

You have a talent for youtube style storytelling so keep it up i'd just put more effort into the overall presentation.


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MineJERMO responds:

yeah, I also realized I need to clean the animations but I wanted to finish the video first and I'll clean out everything on my other videos. I'll see what colors and can put in to really bring it out. I have a bad habit of not keeping drawings proportional but that's simply because I don't know how to lol. And Also.... I TOTALLY FORGOT TO DO ALL THE IN BETWEENS XD. I ACTUALLY FEEL LIKE AN IDIOT XD. but thanks a lot anyway for the review. It really means a lot that I can get a constructive examination of my videos. That's why I made a Newgrounds account in the first place lol.