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Coke finds a weird place and stuff happens
I can barely tell the difference between the different voices.
The animation is below-average.
Nothing happened... This is like less than half an animation. Where's the punchline?
This kind of has a Dragon Ball Z feel, but none of the gratifying build up or payoff.
I suggest looking at tvtropes.com for the Do's and Don'ts of stroytelling.
if you submit something it should be a finished product.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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