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I apologize for the intro and for the name on the bottom. I recently re-branded myself on YouTube and pasted that there lol
Nice! The backgrounds look purdy good! The heads of the dinosaurs look great. I got some tips and tricks... It kind of looks obvious when you cut corners, especially with textures on the rocks and bushes, you can kind of fix this by slightly adjusting colors and brightness, but i would try steering away from that. It would have been cool to have the bushes in a symbol in which they move, so you could set them to single frame as a standard on the timeline, and as the characters pass each one, set to Loop. so it appears as they brushed against the bushes.
the trees look really good, (i cant even tell how you made them). I really like the variety of color and texture on the trees. That being said, having a highly detailed background, and low level detail on characters, is conflicting and a bit distracting. I would suggest either adding some more texture to the characters, or maybe putting a slight blur to the background.
Darkening the back layer of trees would give a slight illusion of distance, rather than brightening.
anyways, i hope this was hopefully and not annoying. Keep it up brotha
Aha ha! thanks bro. This was a good critique. As always, I have room to improve and I will take all these into consideration. Thanks man
Not bad! I would suggest creating scenes from more varied angles and adding more detail to the artwork, but overall this is cool. Nice job.
Yeah... Pivot doesn't work like that very well lol. But I will work on that eventually
Poor writing, art wasn't very good, but the animation flowed nicely for what you had.
The story is super basic... so yeah it's a little plain lol I get it
Art could be better yeah. The Sprites I made kinda suck. But still working on that
and thank you. If there's one thing I'm confident about it's the animation it'self lol
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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