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You're very talented, but the project seems overly ambitious for the time you've put into it. some parts are fantastic, and some are heavily phoned in, and the piece jarringly flips back and forth between two qualities. it would look better and more cohesive if you everything was the same style, even if it meant lowering the quality of some scenes to match the others.
You animation for the wolves is good, but slightly awkward, which you can easily rectify with more experience. There are also unnecessarily long pauses between each line of dialogue between the characters, so you just need to clean up the pacing there. My biggest issue is that the story seems too similar to Avatar: The Last Airbender. This is just the prologue, but it does seem like Avatar, but with wolves. I don't mean to come across as too negative about your work, but I think with a little more experience and originality, you could make something really great.
Keep making stuff and I hope to see your work in the future.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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