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Nice job. Only reason I'm not giving 5 stars is because there's no way for Alexandrite and Sardonyx to exist at the same time.
sardonyx is so cute 10/10
Nice animation. I like it alot
would be better if alexandrite was futa too
Overall, good work. The animation and art quality do what you set out to accomplish. There are going to be some who question the "quality" of your work, but you're also experimenting with stylized characters and it's as much a "style" question as a "detail" level or "quality" of your craft... So disregard that chatter (best advice for you)...
The single greatest improvement for the least investment would still be some foley (sound) work. Maybe some music in the background while you're at it...
In the mid-to-long run of your projects, you might also consider some variation on preset camera angles. Now, I know this is a commission, so maybe you've already thought of it, and it just didn't fit with this particular short. And same with sound(s) as the client might want something to customize as his/her own... Seen that myself... So consider it just a suggestion. Maybe have a couple buttons to shift the scene toward a full-frontal/full rear view, and maybe a mirror. The mirror wouldn't be anything more than a perfect 180 mirror swap (so just a batch-process of all frames) and you might be surprised depending on the care you take in craft on the full front/rear view.
Anyways, it's good as repetitive lopp sets go, and you seem to be making progress. good work, and I'm confident I'm not the only one who looks forward to your next. Don't forget to breathe, relax, and then keep on keeping on... :o)
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