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Rias doing whatever it takes to get a contract.
Is not cuck fetish, gay futa, liberal porn with woman that look like boys.
Pepe is pleased by your lack of lefitist fagtanic dingelberry mage degeneracy.
Would fap the nugget again.
Well, as said below, the face and the anatomy generally could use some work. Also this hair look kinda disturbing, did you just take it from somewhere else? Anyway, about the animation. I like that even the bed and part of hair have a bit of motion, it's always nice to see that this is not just some sort of a dummy. You definitely need to poot more intermediate frames into it, so the whole picture can look smoother. Just about 5 frames for tits and 2 for arms isn't enough, you can do better for sure. Also i'm not sure that this is a suitable sound for a titfuck but i know how hard this is to find something that sounds not weird xD
You should watch some of the good NSFWs here on Newgrounds, it might help.
Anyway, keep doing what you are doing, it is always hard at first, but you will keep getting better and better eventually. Just be sure to try something new with every new try. I'll keep my eye on you :D
Thank you. As for the hair I drew it out and tried to cell shade it. I'm still new to drawing. I never really was great at it haha. I have a lot of improving. For the sound effect I wanted it to sound like a fap sound. Its really hard to find sound effects that can be applied to adult flash...I'll try harder next time.
the music is way to melancholic, very unsettling
the description is misleading, "waste no time making her do whatever you want to complete the contract" its a loop, there's no interaction.
the sex noises are repetitive, try finding at least 2 and mix them together.
i liked the moans and the shape of the tits, hands are well done too, though the face could use some work, try going to rule 34 and find some good pics as reference.
Thanks for the Honesty. I'll definitely work on those things. I'll fix my description. Thanks so much!
não e bom , mais tenho esperança que você pode criar coisas melhores .
I'd like to let everyone know a little more about this flash and myself! This is the first flash I have ever done and submitted to any site. I'm still very new to flash. I started using Adobe 3 months ago. I took up drawing again at that time as well from a long break. All of the comments you awesome people decide to leave will be very helpful to me. Please let me know how I can improve to make better works in the future. Spare me a little criticsm. I'm new! ;_;
Thanks everyone! <3
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