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Maze Attack - Story Trailer

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The New Look At Maze Attack

Not to long ago I released an open beta of this game and received a lot of valuable feedback. Which has help this game improve dramatically!
I am working on another open beta of my game (which will also include many of the changes) for now I did create a new story/Gameplay trailer that will show some of the new gameplay, features, and give you insight of the dept of story Maze Attack will offer.

Leave your feedback in the comments below, and be 100% honest with your feedback, for feedback (criticism) creates the opportunity to make something better.

What I am asking:
1. watch both videos and let me know if you like how the game is progressing.
2. if you have any ideas on what can make the game even better and/or suggestions on gameplay, features, mechanics, animations, etc... then post it below

The Before Feedback:
https://youtu.be/26RQT7_2xNs

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Love the story. Intense

Please take out the colour gradients in the text boxes and from the text itself, it harms readability (the text's colour should contrast with the background's colour, e.g. black&white, yellow&red, etc.) and it's very ugly... It's not by chance that you haven't seen any good games that use them like that. Try also to use easy to read font families for menus (e.g. the one that you used in "Features Highlight", it only makes sense to use handwriting styles if the text is related, for example, to a letter that a character wrote).
You will thank yourself in the future for fixing these things.

Try also not to cut the characters bodies without any frame around them to support those cuts.
I enjoyed hearing the story better than watching the game cutscenes.

JoshuaLeeWest responds:

thanks for the feedback!
so I need to revisit the coloring, and fonts that are used.
and yeah, ill fix those images with a frame or positioning them differently.

I never thought the words were unreadable, so thanks for pointing that out.

I'm trying to go for a unique design set in a unique world.- that being said, I don't want the game to be 'ugly'.
so feedback like this really helps alot.

this is a heavy puzzle game with a hand full of interesting characters progressing in a original story.
the story might seem un-original, however, what you heard is how it starts- pretty much the beginning. as the player progress, information will be told that will reveal the real reason of Maze Attack and his existance.
making this kind of game while trying to stay unique and original is a challenge- however, with work and feedback im sure Maze Attack will become a great product.
(This Game is still Work In Progress)

so again, thanks for your feedback.

Game looks not that good and original, sorry. I'd something complete different

JoshuaLeeWest responds:

Are you able to elaborate some? feedback is an important part to any development.
trust me i wont get offended.

if you are able to point out 2 or 3 things that does not make this game look good that will be greatly helpful and appreciated!

About the game:
this is a heavy puzzle game with a hand full of interesting characters progressing in a original story.
the story might seem un-original, however, what you heard is how it starts- pretty much the beginning.

As the player progress, information will be told that will reveal the real reason of Maze Attack and his existance. plus why all this chaos begun.

making this kind of game (heavy puzzle, adventure) while trying to stay unique and original is a challenge- however, with work and feedback im sure Maze Attack will become a great product.
(This Game is still Work In Progress)

so again, thanks for your feedback! And if you can, maybe share 2 or 3 things that doesn't make this game look good.

Credits & Info

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Votes
72
Score
2.78 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 25, 2017
4:46 PM EDT
Genre
Action