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I think there's something here. Based on this short, I think you have a good understanding of comedic timing, but you need to study up on presentation and production value. Also, the lack of proper resolution to the story itself is a hindrance.
If you stick with it and keep moving forward with a goal to improve, I think you can really make a name for yourself!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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