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Trying to learn how to animate, this is one of my first atempts without using tweening.
This is lit af! I love the facial expression! You might wanna make it better, the sex scene is a bit exaggerated. Can you re-do this in a more realistic position? That would be awesome!
very well made, art is consistent but the fps is much too low to be good, and the speed of the animation is too fast, so we can't see how well the animation actually works. either way it's not bad, I'll look forward to the future
Very nice for an early piece. With a little higher fps and a few more body parts this would be excellent. A lot of great potential, i love the style.
Okay, it's a good loop-turned-vid... And obviously any sound would improve the thing greatly...
Would like to see a primitive plot for this. Even that most of your work will be in loop form, and you certainly still can get by with it... It's a simple story base (all porn is) so start with the presentation, girl is "introduced" and you can figure/flesh out what you want for that. Then start with the loop slow for a beginning, allowing you to incrementally increase her speed. Now if you build the loop at a high enough frame-rate, you can change her speed by simply cutting out certain intermediary frames from later repetitions of the loop... The more frames go missing, the faster and more enthusiastic she seems to get. Working this with a certain amount of subtlety (basically letting her repeat the loop several times over before removing more frames) you can instill a "building tension" effect for the audience... Finally, as you get to it, building the cum-shot will be the last part and should be able to fluidly finish the same loop you started with, basically a few frames of her trembling and quivering, shoving down, and of course the cum to squirt, drizzle, and spread from the orgasm to make a mess around her knees and lower legs... So goes the plot and storyboard, such as it is...
On sounds, you have a choice. It's arbitrary, but you can present this with intent to be serious about porn. so you should take care in collecting sounds that work well with your presentation and add to the erotic effect. OR you could just throw this at us gawking perverts like the jokes we are, and collect a fairly ridiculous bunch of customs sounds that are "close enough" to get the point across... but certainly add a few "wacky" surprises just to make us all smile. Too many in the erotica genre are way too serious for the quality of products they're pushing, and the same concept does tend to get "done to death"...
Overall, you've got something there.. Hope you revisit to do more with it. I'll look forward to see whatever that is. Don't forget to breathe, relax, and keep on keeping on... animators animate. :o)
Thank you and thanks for such a wonderful review :)
Alright, this is not that bad for a first try. Try makin' more frames for a more smooth motion, otherwise it will look jumpy. I like the artstyle, i definitely can imagine something great drawn this way. It is better to make a gif/swf file instead of video format, imo. Sound would be great, even if it sounds weird its better than nothing. Anyhow, keep trying to improve. We will surely get better eventually xD
I would love to convert into gif, but I can't get the quality right, .swf would be nice :D
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