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Comedy - Original
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wild
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bear
smokey

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Uploaded
Apr 9, 2017 | 6:47 PM EDT

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Charlie and the gang are coming back from their camping trip and shit gets weird!

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ChristovgrigoriChristovgrigori

Rated 5 / 5 stars

LOL! The ending is great!


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zachselsiorzachselsior

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It was ok, the set up was dragged out, and thus I could easily see the joke coming from a mile away, Humor is about subverting expectations, so you should have your jokes happen before your viewer figures out what it's gonna be.

Also every one is oddly super muscular, save for bones dude, some variety in body types would probably give your characters some individuality.

Also the cgi mini T rex made me giggle, keep that in :)



Twelve20twoTwelve20two

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad! The writing is pretty decent. Work on your shading and linework, though. And be sure to give key-frame animating a shot. It's generally more time consuming, but I feel like it could definitely help with your work. The tweening animation looks clunky and outdated, but I'm sure if you continue to practice that as well, you'll get better in general.