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Snow Day

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rated 3.33 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Experimental
Tags:
life
poetry
poem
childhood

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Apr 7, 2017 | 11:59 PM EDT

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When I was a kid, each day took forever
That made bad days worse, but the good days were better.

When I was in class, all I wanted was home
And when I felt crabby, I wished I was grown.

As a teenager, I sought admiration
But as soon as i found it, I missed isolation.

The day I could smoke, all I wanted were drinks
And once that was legal, I craved harder things.

One day I ran out of things to desire
And once that was gone I only felt tired.
Each birthday's compressed like it’s snow in a plow
But I really don't mind it. That seems fine for now

(Written by Callison Slater, performed by Jesse Lowther)

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gopherguygopherguy

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Short but very poignant, this is a great piece. The texturing of each frame adds a lot to the story. I think it could have been nice to have that texture start out less chaotic and grow moreso as he ages, but it's still great as is.


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SCOP2SCOP2

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great artstyle, could balance the audio out a little bit. Plus it feels a bit like the audio effect on the voice came off a bit cheesy to say the least. Other than that keep up the good work my man.


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StephenHutchinsStephenHutchins

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Beautiful. Each frame was painted wonderfully.


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