Well this was different here some fun interactivity some interesting visual elements, You have some good game elements here and does need some added polish I wouldn't have written this review if I didn't think you had a good foundation because it has potential to be even better but overall this was a nice little game here and I had some good fun with this one here

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And who cares about acceptance? Either people like you as you are or they don't. That's reality, a place where you should stay. If you have no enemies and everyone loves you then you are not living in reality, you are not real.

Lots of potential, but none of it realized.

This game shows a lot of potential the music is excellent, the graphics seem very fitting and the story shows a lot of promise. That being said, it's got two really big problems that prevent it from realizing any of it.

First, it's way, way too slow. I consistently read all the text before it even finishes fading in, then it sticks around for about ten times as long then slowly fades out - there really needs to be a continue button. Along the same lines, the character is horrendously slow to move across the screen - its speed needs to be doubled at least.

Second, the game uses the WASD keys for primary movement instead of the Arrows. It makes sense to do that when the mouse is also a primary input but that's not the case in this game so it just feels incredibly awkward here. At the very least, the player needs the option to correct the control scheme even if the default remains the same as it is now.

A very beautiful game with a story that hit close to home.

I like the concept and design, but it's painfully slow as it is. It would be nice to be able to speed up the text, and also if the character moved faster. If those things were fixed, more choices and such may be attractive.