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same as my first verison of 3000 chapter 1 only i fixed some audio and animation!
same credits as before
this is a pilot for a new animated series im trying to start up called 3000. its a more dramatic, serious and dark story about man kinds battle for survival after the end of the world
Christine voice of michelle : https://m.youtube.com/user/sheiks65
Scar voice of theif : https://youtu.be/QpBb0t7AlwY
Facebook page for marcprime9: https://www.facebook.com/CharlietheReaper/
Sorry, I find it kinda funny how a fixed version of a previously uploaded video managed to maintain two typos found in the intro and credits.
The story is nothing original but I don't think it's trying to be. The writing is...actually pretty great, the old dude seems pretty humane instead of being the typical generic badass found in most post apocalyptic stories, which I appreciate. The girl is a girl, she hasn't had much screentime yet.
Then there's the visuals, which are sadly the worst part of this video. The perspective is a mess, the character designs are very weirdly proportioned, and even the lip flaps manage to look..."strange", which I didn't believe was possible. Giving each character a constant smile probably isn't the best idea.
My advice: Work on the character designs, mainly their proportions. The perspective is less important at the moment.
And please, fix the lip flaps. Neutral lips work better.
Thank you so much for the kind words of advice ill take them into consideration im glad you liked the first episode. Hope you have a great day my friend stay awesome!
Cool animation dude! Loved the serious tone. Of course there is room for improvement but you seem very passionate about the project so I wouldn't worry about it, you'll get there!
Keep it up!
I appercaite it man! I know the audio is shit but have to start somewhere:) i appercaite the review thank you
Well it's not bad. That's for sure. As far as story goes it's cliche sure, but this has potential on its own. It's a well executed cliche. The hero seems like a cookie cutter macho older badass type. Learn a little thing called character development, its everything friend. On the tech side of things, fix your audio first. A old friend once told me "a audience will walk out of a movie with bad sound much quicker than a movie with bad visuals. Your shots, are pretty interesting though, that's definitely the strength here.
Keep up the good work, and thanks for the art!
Thank you! :)
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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